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Wednesday, May 22, 2013


The scary orange
by Robert
Once upon a time there was a boy that was a coward so he had slept with his mom. One night he said to himself from now on I’m not scared of anything. In the middle of the night he heard a crrreeeK! He went outside and he didn’t see anything so he walked slowly along a path. He kept on walking and eventually he saw a sign that said

Then he kept on walking and there was a dead end he said that there has to be something. He went closer and closer and then a vine pulled him to this portal and the portal made a crrrrreeeK! So he went in. Then he saw a cow he said is this a monster? No it can’t be! It is not attacking me. Then he realized that he has to find the portal and he did but it took a long time. Then he went back to the camper he went in he went to room and slowly opened the door and there was an             

 

Orange!
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  1. AnonymousMay 31, 2013 at 9:32 AM

    hi robert thiss story is awwwwwwwwwwwssooooooooooooommmmmmmmeeeeeee you shuld be an othur ok it is just awwwwwwwwwwsoooooooooomeeeeeeeeeeeeee


    .LIAM

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  2. AnonymousMay 31, 2013 at 9:34 AM

    I dident like when you said coward. by Elaina

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  3. Mrs. EdelMay 31, 2013 at 9:34 AM

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  4. Mrs. EdelMay 31, 2013 at 9:36 AM

    Elaina why do you not like the word coward. By Robert

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  5. Mrs. EdelMay 31, 2013 at 9:38 AM

    Thank you all my fans. ByRobert

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  6. Mrs. EdelMay 31, 2013 at 9:40 AM

    I like how you had a big picture of an orange.Do you like oranges? Because I like oranges.


    Carl

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  7. AnonymousMay 31, 2013 at 9:44 AM

    who is the boy. why did you do a scary orange.
    i liked the ORANGE.matteo

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  8. Mrs. EdelMay 31, 2013 at 9:46 AM

    I like oranges so much i am a orange. ByRobert

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  9. AnonymousMay 31, 2013 at 9:52 AM

    By Ethan
    Robert what made you think about it? Good job on your story.

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  10. Mrs. EdelMay 31, 2013 at 9:53 AM

    Why is he sleeping with his mom if he's a coward? I thought your story was funny!!!!!
    Aylie

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  11. AnonymousMay 31, 2013 at 10:04 AM

    I thought it was funny! Why was he a coward?

    Noah

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  12. AnonymousJune 13, 2013 at 12:55 PM

    hay bobby i like your bolg. whan do you think you will do a storylike that agin.
    BY JORDAN

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